I've been meaning to get to these pages forever. I just finished the last page, last night. I definitely need to do some more sequential page practice, these were fun.
Thanks! I think it's probably the smoke in the backgound that's throwing it off so much. I don't think I realized how yellow it was when I did it (this might have been one of those 4am pages on a weekend, lol). I'll tweak it when I get a minute, they should be more grayish, like the first page.